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The prompts will be available on Monday, so we have a nice little handful of days left to play around and get ourselves in fighting/loving trim. How's about we start off with one of those drabble trees, eh?
1. I'll kick it off with a little bit o' writing.
2. You guys can reply to that with your own little bit o' writing that plays with something from the first (a line, a phrase, a scene, mood).
3. The next drabblers can reply to any of the above comments, and so on. Until we have a lovely, sturdy, romantic tree, with many ficcish branches all growing out of the first comment.
Have fun! Despite the name, for this drabble tree any length goes. Comment two, four, as many times as you like. Feel the romance, baby.
1. I'll kick it off with a little bit o' writing.
2. You guys can reply to that with your own little bit o' writing that plays with something from the first (a line, a phrase, a scene, mood).
3. The next drabblers can reply to any of the above comments, and so on. Until we have a lovely, sturdy, romantic tree, with many ficcish branches all growing out of the first comment.
Have fun! Despite the name, for this drabble tree any length goes. Comment two, four, as many times as you like. Feel the romance, baby.
Part II again
Date: 2007-09-22 12:41 am (UTC)Ray grins. The Mountie falls asleep while the Chicago flatfoot soldiers on into the typewritten wilderness. Oh, he's never gonna let Fraser hear the end of this one.
But he finishes typing as quickly and quietly as he can, careful not to dislodge Dief, who's somehow fallen asleep with his head on Fraser's foot and his ass on Ray's newly-polished loafers (typical). When he's done, he slides his chair back gently so he can get to his feet--Dief barely moves--and walks around the desk.
"Hey," he says softly, putting one hand on Fraser's shoulder; Fraser doesn't always wake calm, Ray's learned that, too, and he doesn't want to startle him. But he stays relaxed, his eyes just kind of fluttering open, long, dark lashes over sleep-blurry blue. His pupils are unfocused--he's still half-asleep--and he smiles a little, and when Ray leans down and kisses him, he opens his mouth easily on a low, lazy moan. Ray closes his own eyes and lets himself fall into it, Fraser's mouth sweet and slack, his tongue tasting faintly of sugar, the curve of his jaw warm under Ray's hand. When Ray pulls back, Fraser smiles again, unguarded and so bright that Ray almost stops breathing.
But it's late, and Fraser's probably starving, and Ray's got leftover ziti in his fridge. "C'mon, Benny," he says, sliding his hand down to link Fraser's fingers through his, "let's get you home."
Re: Part II again = love
Date: 2007-09-22 04:00 am (UTC)And sure, okay, maybe he shouldn't drink so much coffee, and the cigarettes he sneaks don't help either, but mostly he figures it's just the way he's wired. A night owl.
He gets feel tired, kind of, but it's like his body is wired for electricity and the switch just doesn't turn off the way it should, so he'll lie there in the dark and vibrate, then get up and go back to work, or put some music on and dance, or flip through the channels until morning.
When Fraser stays over, Ray sleeps a lot better. Maybe because he has somebody to burrow in next to, and maybe because a good hard fuck works a hell of a lot better than warm milk.
And when he still can't sleep, when his eyes pop open in the middle of the night and his body just won't understand that it's off time, not on time, there's Fraser. In his bed, sleeping like the prettiest Canadian log you ever saw.
He figures Fraser gets mooned over plenty during the day, and him making googly eyes at his partner wouldn't fly for long down at the 27, but nighttime is his time. He fishes his glasses off the bedside table, props himself up on an elbow and takes his time, getting as close as he needs and just looking, memorizing Fraser's nose, counting his flaws, watching him breathe.
Sometimes Ray doesn't mind not sleeping so well.
Re: Part II again = love
Date: 2007-09-22 05:50 am (UTC)At a quarter past eight Fraser catches a glimpse of blue pinstriped pajamas out of the corner of his eye, and looks up from his morning tea to see Ray standing in the kitchen door. He's barefoot and rumpled, and only says, "It's Saturday, Benny," before making his unsteady way to the bathroom.
"Sorry, Ray," Fraser calls softly after him, and goes to turn on the coffee machine.
At half past ten, Ray's lounging on the couch and going on about Saturday morning cartoons, which have apparently suffered a tremendous decline in quality over the past three decades, and Fraser's getting somewhat impatient. If they could all just learn to wake up at a reasonable hour, this household might actually get something accomplished on the weekends. However, as Ray and Ray have both explained many times, American weekends aren't meant to accomplish anything at all. So Fraser waits, and Ray smirks at him every time he twitches.
At noon, Ray says, "Okay, c'mon, let's get the bum out of bed." Fraser couldn't be happier to hear it. He strides down the hall with a sense of irked purpose, crosses the bedroom, flings the curtains open, and gives the blanket-wrapped lump on the bed an expectant scowl.
The lump hardly moves.
"Aw, c'mon," Ray says, coming through the door. "You've got to know better than that. Here, let me show you how it's done. I've been doing this for Frannie for twenty-five years." He grasps the edge of the blanket and yanks it back, leaving Ray terribly vulnerable, all of his golden skin exposed except for the narrow rectangle beneath his boxers.
And still Ray sleeps, though he does curl a little bit tighter than before. "Uh. Benny, have you ever considered that maybe we might need professional help?" Ray suggests, quite seriously -- but when he turns to look Fraser in the eye, his control falters, his eyes soften, and a soft chuff of laughter escapes his lips.
Suddenly, the bed creaks, and Ray's bolting up, eyes wide and panicked. "Hey, no wait, don't start without me, 'm up, just let me -- " He blinks at them for a few seconds, squinting myopically at them. "Wait," he croaks, "you've got all your clothes on."
"Yes, Ray," Fraser agrees. "We woke up several hours ago, in fact."
"No, that's not what I mean, I mean I thought I heard Vecchio, uh -- "
"Oh, you did, did you." Ray grins. "You know what I think? I think you need a refresher course on what I sound like when I -- "
Of course Fraser protests, but in the end, it makes hardly any difference. At least this way, he thinks, they won't be entirely unproductive.
Re: Part II again = love
Date: 2007-09-25 03:23 am (UTC)